victor su
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Could you help check out the following paragraph, such as the grammer, wording, etc. (It's a little bit long)
The wedding was nothing particularly different from the other weddings I was invited to in the past few years, only the number of attendants and the dishes on the tables somehow signaling a different status of the families of the bridegroom and his bride. But this can only emit a very limited information in regard to the wealth of the families involved, since these kind of weddings in the local places are too much a stereotype, and would only cost about tens of thousands Yuan, which even a relatively poor family can afford, since the money received from the invitees may more or less cover this expense, and occasionally even outnumber it. Moreover, it is a matter of face. Even a family stricken for years by the harshness of frugal economy will try all out to hold a decent-looking wedding.
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Thank you...
The wedding was nothing particularly different from the other weddings I was invited to in the past few years, only the number of attendants and the dishes on the tables somehow signaling a different status of the families of the bridegroom and his bride. But this can only emit a very limited information in regard to the wealth of the families involved, since these kind of weddings in the local places are too much a stereotype, and would only cost about tens of thousands Yuan, which even a relatively poor family can afford, since the money received from the invitees may more or less cover this expense, and occasionally even outnumber it. Moreover, it is a matter of face. Even a family stricken for years by the harshness of frugal economy will try all out to hold a decent-looking wedding.
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Thank you...