kati83
New member
- Joined
- Dec 5, 2012
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Italy
Hi all ,
im a new member in this forum. i find this forum very intresting and i think is the best way to improve my english .My english isn't well im doing all my effort to improve it ,also with your help it will be well .thank you all
this is my essay could you check it and give me my mistakes thanks again ;-)
Since early age everyone would be influenced throughout his childhood by many factors which be able to influnce on his character , personality and beliefs .
first of all there are many sources in which we can get different information and education , but i think there two stronger influence which be able to let deep trace on our character and belifs : school and home life .
On the one hand , home life is the first element or factor which helps the person to build his personality and character because of the good relationship between parents and their child , so they will be able to let a great impact on him than any other person .
On the other hand , we have to make sur that the second home of child is the school in where he gains extra information and different strategies of education .Also school helps us to devolop mutually relations with friends , teachers and others.
Not only school gives us good and basic education but also helps us to find ourselves with other personalities and characters , so to make comparision between freinds and classmates , we will find out similar and different personalities which have different interests and passions. However every one has his unique pattern of feelings ,thoughts and behaviours .
to sum up , i think both school and home life have an importance role on our character and beliefs but in my opinion home life is the fondamental factor on our personality and character .I have to make sur that home life or house hold provides us a rich environment , we don't forget that we gain also too much encouragment , support and love from home than other place .
im a new member in this forum. i find this forum very intresting and i think is the best way to improve my english .My english isn't well im doing all my effort to improve it ,also with your help it will be well .thank you all
this is my essay could you check it and give me my mistakes thanks again ;-)
Since early age everyone would be influenced throughout his childhood by many factors which be able to influnce on his character , personality and beliefs .
first of all there are many sources in which we can get different information and education , but i think there two stronger influence which be able to let deep trace on our character and belifs : school and home life .
On the one hand , home life is the first element or factor which helps the person to build his personality and character because of the good relationship between parents and their child , so they will be able to let a great impact on him than any other person .
On the other hand , we have to make sur that the second home of child is the school in where he gains extra information and different strategies of education .Also school helps us to devolop mutually relations with friends , teachers and others.
Not only school gives us good and basic education but also helps us to find ourselves with other personalities and characters , so to make comparision between freinds and classmates , we will find out similar and different personalities which have different interests and passions. However every one has his unique pattern of feelings ,thoughts and behaviours .
to sum up , i think both school and home life have an importance role on our character and beliefs but in my opinion home life is the fondamental factor on our personality and character .I have to make sur that home life or house hold provides us a rich environment , we don't forget that we gain also too much encouragment , support and love from home than other place .