Hello, I would be really greatful if somebody cen check my recommendation letter. Thanks a lot :)

Dear Selection Committee,
it is my immense pleasure to recommend one of my best students, XXX, into your program for the next coming academic year.
XXX has been my student since her first year in YYY University, and I have to admit that she has been very talented, ambitious and quick in grasping concepts and ideas. It was a great pleasure to have her among my students, as she was very enthusiastic to learn new things. In additions, she has demonstrated a good work ethic, and the ability to accomplish tasks independently with great amount of creativity. Indeed, she had put in a large amount of extra effort in helping the other students with revisions and class notes.
Although she has had a chance to follow her Masterís Degree at our department without any additional obstacles, she has determined to face higher challenges and stronger competitions in other country. I have a strong confidence that your faculty provide her with new opportunities to progress her knowledge and skills. I believe that XXX will be one of the most promising students in your program and I am sure that she will succeed in the future.
To sum up, it was a great pleasure having XXX here as a student and I would strongly recommend her for a place in your program.
Please feel free contact me if I can provide additional information.
Sincerely,