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    creative writing..please check

    Press pass the cloud of imagination
    Make it your livelyhood

    The vastness of joyful living is not measured in per sq ft. but the per moments that your heart feels.

    Kindly note I have coined the word livelyhood...that indirectly speaks about our dreams. Please tell me how is overall writing style

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    Re: creative writing..please check

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Press pass the cloud of imagination - This doesn't make any sense.
    Make it your livelyhood

    The vastness of joyful living is not measured in per sq ft. but the per moments that your heart feels.

    Kindly note I have coined the word livelyhood...that indirectly speaks about our dreams. Please tell me how is overall writing style
    I don't understand how your invented word "livelyhood" speak about our dreams, directly or indirectly. Your first sentence doesn't make any sense at all. A "press pass" is an ID card which identifies you as a member of the press (journalist/photographer etc).
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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