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    please please correct my letter :)

    To Mr The director of XXX College

    Sir, since i am verry intrested in your college and the hight scolar educqtion in it
    i would like to ask if it is possible to subscribe with my scientific bachelor degree in frensh program or should i best chose a sicentific field as biology ?
    i am wondering alsoo if your college provides financial aid for international students ?

    yours sincerly Miss XXX

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    Re: please please correct my letter :)

    Quote Originally Posted by reemalady View Post
    To Mr The director of XXX College

    Sir,

    since i am verry intrested in your college and the hight scolar educqtion in it
    i would like to ask if it is possible to subscribe with my scientific bachelor degree in frensh program or should i best chose a sicentific field as biology ?
    i am wondering alsoo if your college provides financial aid for international students ?

    yours sincerly Miss XXX
    Welcome to the forum.

    There are multiple problems with your piece. I have marked every error in red. The errors are with spelling, capitalisation, punctuation and grammar. You need to check all your spellings before you post as many of the errors would have been avoided if you had checked the spelling.

    Remember the basic rules of written English:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    - End every sentence with a single punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
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    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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