Re: please please correct my letter :)
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Originally Posted by reemalady
There are multiple problems with your piece. I have marked every error in red. The errors are with spelling, capitalisation, punctuation and grammar. You need to check all your spellings before you post as many of the errors would have been avoided if you had checked the spelling.
Remember the basic rules of written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.