To Mr The director of XXX College
Sir, since i am verry intrested in your college and the hight scolar educqtion in it
i would like to ask if it is possible to subscribe with my scientific bachelor degree in frensh program or should i best chose a sicentific field as biology ?
i am wondering alsoo if your college provides financial aid for international students ?
yours sincerly Miss XXX
There are multiple problems with your piece. I have marked every error in red. The errors are with spelling, capitalisation, punctuation and grammar. You need to check all your spellings before you post as many of the errors would have been avoided if you had checked the spelling.
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