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    Default Could you point out what I did wrong?

    Trying is very important. But human is restricted by their brain. However, when something pushes an idea of a person, he can catch his idea correctly and becomes success. For example, when I couldnít solve my problem such as math questions or test questions, I just go to the bed. After sleep, I found the answer of questions in my head. Another example is in science. According to Vonneumann, he couldnít find a chemical figure. However, when he saw a snake walking, he could solve the chemical problem.

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    Quote Originally Posted by haha27 View Post
    Trying is very important. But human is restricted by their brain. However, when something pushes an idea of a person, he can catch his idea correctly and becomes success. For example, when I couldn’t solve my problem such as math questions or test questions, I just go to the bed. After sleep, I found the answer of questions in my head. Another example is in science. According to Vonneumann, he couldn’t find a chemical figure. However, when he saw a snake walking, he could solve the chemical problem.
    Is this for homework?

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    Nope,

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    Quote Originally Posted by haha27 View Post
    Nope,
    What is it for then?

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    I am going to take the TOEFL so I need to improve my english writing skill for the test. If nobody tells me what I did wrong, I will never know my grammar mistakes so I am trying to ask a native speark about my english problems.

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    haha27, you will remember from previous threads that proofreading requests are outwith the scope of the 'Ask A Teacher' forum.

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    I have pointed out that we do not just proofread and fix people's work here. We answer specific questions about specific aspects of the language. In this post, your title simply asked if there were any grammar problems.
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    These sentences which you keep asking us to 'fix', haha, should be posted in the Editing and Writing forum, with a title which 'includes all or part of the word/phrase being discussed'*— such as 'to enjoy with a lover'.

    I have already moved some of them there myself.

    *Extract from the Posting Guidelines.

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    Default Re: Could you point out what I did wrong?

    On that very basis, I have moved this thread to "Editing and Writing Topics".
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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