Re: Hi i need a little help on my essay for my hero
I think it needs editing. You should write the pronoun I with a capital letter to start with. "Whenever" is written as one word, not two. "Filling down" should be "feeling down".
Some people may think about a comic book character are someone like Batman , Superman, are even Spiderman but my hero is my mother.And one day i hope that i can be like her are something close to her. - Check what you meant by are in these sentences.
As to the style and syntax, let native speakers have a word.
If I were a native speaker of English, I would never shut up. :-)