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    Default Can sombody help me to make this essay

    My exciting holiday
    My exciting holiday is when i was in Macedonia.
    I went in last July, i went with my fiance, we stayed for to weeks in a hotel. In first week we went in Struga, there was looks beautiful But next week we went in Ohri when looks was the more beautiful than Struga. Same in the Struga we stayed in Hotel, but his beautiful were that itís near the beach. From my window to hotel roomís I could see a wonderful views, beach, leak etc. In the morning we walked to the beach around the lake accompanied by sun rays and lakes waves melody and than we went sunbathing and sometimes swimming. In the evening we went for the lunch in another restaurant where the cooked very tasty fish so we liked very much it. Later we went in a pub to listening a music and dance.
    So this was my exciting holiday where I enjoyed very much indeed but I hope that next vacation will pass even better than this holiday.
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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: Can sombody help me to make this essay

    Quote Originally Posted by emul View Post
    My Exciting Holiday
    My exciting holiday is was when I was in Macedonia.

    I went in last July , i went with my fiance. We stayed for to two weeks in a hotel. In The first week we went in to Struga. there was looks It was beautiful. But The next week we went in to Ohri when looks that was the more beautiful than Struga. Same in the Struga Again we stayed in a hotel, but his beautiful were that it’s but this hotel was near the beach. From my window to hotel room’s I could see a wonderful views., beach, leak(?) etc. In the morning we walked to the beach, around the lake accompanied by sun rays and the lakes waves' melody. and Then we went sunbathing and sometimes swimming. In the evening we went for the lunch (dinner?) in another restaurant where they cooked very tasty fish so and we liked it very much it. Later we went in to a pub to listening a to music and dance.
    So this was my exciting holiday where that I enjoyed very much indeed, but I hope that next vacation will pass even better than this holiday.
    b.

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