Re: Need help with the following paragraph...
I am writing to enquire about the status of my application. Please advise me how you corresponded with my school [add name of school] and how they responded.
Originally Posted by Jit833
You gave me some information about my application by telephone but I would be grateful if you could provide me with that information in writing. My teacher would like to look at it.
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