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    Please! I really need help in correcting my mistakes
    Thanks in advance!

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    I really need your help ,since I'm a biiginner .Thanks in advance !

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    Quote Originally Posted by pretty crazy View Post
    I really need your help ,since I'm a biiginner .Thanks in advance !
    Not a teacher. Pretty crazy, stop flooding! What I know that these teachers are good, but they are not going to correct all your "writing" mistakes you can make grammar mistakes, but when everything is messed up it's hard to understand you and now I think that you are illiterate. If you can't write in English correctly please download "Mozzila Firefox" this explorer corrects mistakes automatically. Nobody is going to do your homework for you just sit tight and work for yourself. =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by pretty crazy View Post
    Terry: I'm looking at the jobs pages in the paper. There's something here I like the sound of.
    Modus International, a 1. drive supplier of car parts, has a 2.candidate for
    the 3.post of Sales Manager in their Brighton office.

    Sandra: That sounds like your kind of job. When does it begin?

    Terry: Let me see. Er, 4. Commencing April 1st, it says here. That's in three weeks' time.

    Sandra: You'd better get your 5. CV in, if you're interested. What else does it say
    about the job?

    Terry: It says that the successful 6. Application should be suitably 7.incentive and
    should have had extensive 8. Increment in sales management.

    Sandra: That sounds perfect. You've got a University degree in Business Management, and
    you've been working in sales for more than five years.

    Terry: I suppose so. It also says that he or she should be able to work as part of a
    9. team, and should have 10. Experience and the ability to 11. motivate
    and inspire his or her 12 .advance.

    Sandra: Well, that's great! You've always got on with the people you work with, and
    everyone is always saying how you're able to encourage people to work harder.

    Terry: That's true. It also says that the 13.post include liaising with colleagues
    around the country, training new staff and presenting a full report to the board of
    directors twice a year.
    Sandra: It all sounds quite good. What's the company offering in return?

    Terry: The 14. Covering letter they're offering looks very attractive. It includes a
    15. basic salary of £25000 per annum…

    Sandra: What does that mean?

    Terry: Well, that's the minimum amount of money that you can earn during the year. In
    addition to that,they're offering 10% 16. commitsson on all sales made.
    Sandra: Well, that's a good 17. Application. The more you work, the more you sell.
    And the more you sell, the more money you'll make!

    Terry: Exactly. There's also a guaranteed annual 18. Rewards package of £1500, and a
    19.recollation allowance of £2500.

    Sandra: What's that for?

    Terry: To pay me for moving to the area, finding somewhere to live, and so on. Oh, and
    there are other 20 .benefits, such as a company car, free medical and dental
    insurance and free meals in the canteen. It also says that there is room to
    21.vacancy, so I might end up with an even better job within the company.


    Sandra: So what should you do if you're interested in applying for the job?
    Terry: It says I should send my 22. team, together with a 23. leading,to their
    head office in Sheffield. If the company is interested, they'll contact me to arrange an
    24. interview at one of their offices nearer home.
    Firstly, prettycrazy, you really need to learn to be patient. We are all volunteers here, we have a lot of posts to deal with and yours is long and certainly wasn't simple to read at the start. Thank you for rewriting it so we could read it. Your posts of 22.20 and 22.26 were unnecessary and very poorly written. Posts like that will not encourage us to help you.

    So - your answers. I am going to list the ones which are incorrect and then you can have another try:

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    6
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    12
    13 (look at the next word for a clue)
    14
    16 - Correct word, wrong spelling
    17
    19 - Correct choice, wrong spelling again
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    22 - Really? Is it likely that you are being asked to send a team?
    23 - Is leading a noun?

    Some of your errors are understandable. Some are just not. Check every one of those 24 words in a dictionary again and then read each individual sentence to see if you can see how your choices are incorrect.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Thanks sir and I'm so sorry because I bothered you !I'll try and then repost the answers :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by pretty crazy View Post
    Thanks sir and I'm so sorry because I bothered you! I'll try again and then repost the answers. :)
    Don't worry about bothering us but it is important that you take our suggestions and follow them.
    There is no need to try to address us as "Sir" (or "Madam") - our gender is irrelevant and, in this case, you chose the wrong one anyway.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Thanks ,this is really a part of your tolerance as a a great teacher.Many thanks!

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