Sam, drove in the city last night, and he didn't notice that a cat in the middle of street. Lucky, he was stopping the car in the time and didn't hit it.
Please check my paragraph past simple and past continuous in particular.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Jan-2013 at 23:35. Reason: Typo
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.