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    Smile letter to hm revenue text stop

    Dear Sir/Madam
    I am writting this letter to inform you that my circumstances have changed since november 2012.My monthly incom goes up to nineteen hundred pound.I hve called to your office several time to stop my working text credit before but it is sitll paid to my account.There for i kindly request you to stop my working text credit.
    I look ford to hearing from you.

    yours Fithfully.
    sirajud din

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    Quote Originally Posted by sirajud View Post
    Dear Sir/Madam
    I am writting this letter to inform you that my circumstances have changed since november 2012.My monthly incom goes up to nineteen hundred pound.I hve called to your office several time to stop my working text credit before but it is sitll paid to my account.There for i kindly request you to stop my working text credit.
    I look ford to hearing from you.

    yours Fithfully.
    sirajud din
    1. Insert a space after a period (.)
    2. Capitalize November
    3. Check your spelling - five misspelled words
    4. Capitalize "i", always "I", never "i"
    5 Is it text or tax that you are concerned about?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gillnetter View Post
    1. Insert a space after a period (.)
    2. Capitalize November
    3. Check your spelling - five misspelled words
    4. Capitalize "i", always "I", never "i"
    5 Is it text or tax that you are concerned about?
    Thankyou very much for your correction so next time i will follow your guidence.I am realy biginer with english language and I have a big hope one day i will be able to write good english.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sirajud View Post
    Thankyou very much for your correction so next time i will follow your guidence.I am realy biginer with english language and I have a big hope one day i will be able to write good english.
    Look at point 4 which Gillnetter made. You have read his post and then you have failed to capitalise the word "I" twice just in this post. Do not follow his corrections next time - follow them ​every time.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    O man you make me laugh....I I I I I I naver make mistake about I NAVER..

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    Quote Originally Posted by sirajud View Post
    O​h man you make me laugh. I I I I I I naver make mistake about I NAVER..
    I think you mean "never". You need to get a good dictionary and check your spellings. You made a lot of spelling mistakes in your three posts.

    Never.
    Beginner.
    Guidance.
    Income.
    Writing.
    Faithfully.
    Therefore.
    Forward (I look forward to hearing from you)
    Thank you. (Two words)
    Really.

    Also note that one full stop is sufficient.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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