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sirajud

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12/01/13
2 Berkeley street
:-? HU3 1PR

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to aplay for the job of a hotel receptionist in your international hotel which was advertised in student newspaper.

I ave worked in our locel comunity centre as a sport worker for the last three years. during my previous job i have not only improved my Englishi languge but also i have learnt basic use of computer and I.T.

Three months ago i had travel back to my country.Unexpectedly my journey became longer and consequancly i lost my job.

I have good social skills, I am frindly, patient, hardworking, energetic. moreover I speak three languages.

In the light of my previous experience if i got opportunity to this job I believe i would make the name of the hotel more bright and popular nationally and internationally.for interview at any time.

I lookforward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

I am available
Sirajud Din
 

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Before we spend time on this, you could spend a little more time yourself. All the words I have underlined can be corrected by using any dictionary. You could also capitalise the first person pronoun I.



Make these corrections, and then re-post your letter for our comments.
12/01/13
2 Berkeley street
:-? HU3 1PR

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to aplay for the job of a hotel receptionist in your international hotel which was advertised in student newspaper.

I ave worked in our locel comunity centre as a sport worker for the last three years. during my previous job i have not only improved my Englishi languge but also i have learnt basic use of computer and I.T.

Three months ago i had travel back to my country.Unexpectedly my journey became longer and consequancly i lost my job.

I have good social skills, I am frindly, patient, hardworking, energetic. moreover I speak three languages.

In the light of my previous experience if i got opportunity to this job I believe i would make the name of the hotel more bright and popular nationally and internationally.for interview at any time.

I lookforward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

I am available
Sirajud Din
 
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