[Grammar] Where should I put “on JobsDB”?

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uktous

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Hi,

Question:
Where should I put “on JobsDB”?

Sentence1:
In response to your job posting for an Officer (JFF: 000222) on JobsDB, I have attached my CV for your consideration.

Sentence2:
In response to your job posting on JobsDB for an Officer (JFF: 000222), I have attached my CV for your consideration.

Sentence3:
Other better option

Thanks
 
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emsr2d2

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I would use sentence 2. Sentence 1 looks as if the ad was for "an Officer on JobsDB", as if that were the job title. That's not the case.

I would not use "job posting".

In response to your advert on JobsDB for an Officer (ref: JFF 000222), I attach my CV and covering letter for your consideration.
 
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