Re: need help with my opening and transition sentences.
I have moved this thread to a more appropriate section. However, please note that we can't help you with a piece for a test or an exam. You need to submit your work, not ours. After your finals, when you get your mark and your piece back with comments and corrections, you are welcome to come back for our help if you don't understand any of the corrections.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.