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    Please edit my writing letter and say my mistakes

    Dear mr.sayad,
    I am influenced by your new satelite reciever
    I Would like to know more about the prices and types and discounts the seller offer
    Considering hd-tv , what do you suggest?
    Could you send a catalogue and offer competitive price
    I would like to make a decision on this soon,due to fact that I'd appreciate an early reply.
    Yours faithfully

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    Re: Please edit my writing letter and say my mistakes

    You can edit your post and improve it a great deal by noting the following:

    - Put a space after a comma.
    - Proper nouns should be capitalised.

    Edit your first post using those rules and then we can have another look.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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