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    hamidd2 is offline Newbie
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    Default would you please check my writing letter and say my mistakes and say how is better it

    Dear mr.sayad,
    I am influenced by your new satelite reciever
    I Would like to know more about the prices and types and discounts the seller offer
    Considering hd-tv , what do you suggest?
    Could you send a catalogue and offer competitive price
    I would like to make a decision on this soon,due to fact that I'd appreciate an early reply.
    Yours faithfully
    Saeed

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    Default Re: would you please check my writing letter and say my mistakes and say how is bette

    Duplicate post. This already appears in the main Editing and Writing Topics section. Thread closed.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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