Re: Please help me fix/improve this greeting
Your message to your boyfriend was actually very good and well-written. It is important that it contains your true feelings so I have only made a couple of basic amendments.
Originally Posted by finefrenzy
We say either "one-year anniversary" or "first anniversary" (but not "first year anniversary").
Your message was much better written than the rest of your thread though. In your message to your boyfriend, you used correct capitalisation (first letter of every new sentence and the word "I"), yet throughout the rest of your thread, you didn't. Please remember that it is important to always follow the rules of written English. I had to make many corrections (in red) to the other parts of your thread.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.