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    Need help proofreading highschool essay.

    Hello,
    I wrote an essay and handed it in to my teacher. She returned it back and said I need to proofread it more because I have an organizational problem. So I come to you guys since I doubt my friends will try their hardest to proofread nor I believe they are much more capable than many of you in this forum.

    Thank you,
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    Re: Need help proofreading highschool essay.

    Welcome to the forum. When do you have to resubmit your essay to your teacher for re-marking?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: Need help proofreading highschool essay.

    She did not specifically tell me when. But I would like to submit it by Friday.

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    Re: Need help proofreading highschool essay.

    Well, then you have until Friday to do your best. It would be completely wrong for us to make any amendments or corrections to your essay before you hand it in again. Your teacher has told you that the problem is one of organisation so you know what it is you need to work on. Your teacher needs to see your work, not ours. When you get it back for the last time, you are welcome to come back to the forum if you don't understand any of the teacher's comments or corrections.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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