Re: May you please evaluate my SAT essay?
Welcome to the forum.
Is this the essay you will be submitting for your exam?
On a side note, I note that your member profile shows your native language as English. Can I just check that that is correct? It's easy to hit the wrong choice on the dropdown and it just seemed a little surprising that you said you are an English learner and that a native of Morocco, but that English is your first language.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.