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    I hate My English is offline Newbie
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    Question Can you help??...Please

    Get over your fear of texting her first, The adrenaline rush you got is priceless
    is this statement sounds right?!!Sorry, I'm not a native speaker...:((

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: Can you help??...Please

    It sounds a bit confused to me- the first part sounds negative, but an adrenaline rush is a good feeling.

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    Default Re: Can you help??...Please

    It should be two sentences, not one. You need a period at the end of each sentence. Your tenses seem to conflict. You are telling someone to get over his fear and then you are referring to an adrenaline rush that happened in the past.

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    I hate My English is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: Can you help??...Please

    Thanks, i appreciated :))

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