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    the girl soaked with water?

    Could you please change any mistakes (whether it is grmmar or meaning) in the following sentnece?

    When the Korean team beat the opposite team, i got so excited. Therefore, without knowing, i lifed up the water bottle above my head and shook it. the water in the bottle came out and i found a woman in front of me soaked with water. i felt so sorry for her.

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    Re: the girl soaked with water?

    i lifed- I lifted
    i found a woman in front of me soaked with water- this doesn't really sound natural. I'd say:
    and soaked a woman in front of me

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