Since the day you left, i was dieing.

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honeyhoney

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two lovers were far from each other. now they are together and the boy is talling the girl:

"since the day you left, every day i was dieing and reviving a thousand times."

Was her sentence right?
 

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Two lovers were far away from each other. Now they are together and the boy is telling the girl:

"Since the day you left, every day i was dieing and reviving a thousand times."

Was her sentence right?

No, the sentence is not right.

Since the day you left, I have died and come back to life (or "I have died and been revived") a thousand times.

Please remember to start every sentence with a capital letter.
 
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