See above.I am an English learner but I have some
diffculitiesdifficulties with writing letters and emails. So I am writing the belowparagraph below for practic eing. Would somebody who isa native English languagespeaker please comment on it? And ONEone more thing - would it be OK if I write a letter or an email to practice every now and then, and post it here to have someone to comment on it, or do the forum rules don'tnot allow such things? Thanks to all and here is my paragraph:
Yesterday, I went to the hospital to have my blood drawn for a medical test. The nurse asked me if I
werewas fasting. I told her "No" because nether I know that norI havehad not been told to do so. Then she said she had to ask edthe doctor if isit is okOK to draw theblood even if I'm not fasting. The doctor told her tonot to proceed. with that.
SoI had to go home and come back some other time when I'mI was ready. After two weeks I went back to the hospital. andThis time I'm fastingI had fasted and was ready for the blood test. Surprisingly, the hospital'shospital lab was closed! When I asked why, I beenwas told that today is Sunday and obviouslythe hospital'shospital lab is closed on ("at" in BrE) weekends. SoI had to go home once again and come back when I'm fastingI had fasted and when the hospital'shospital lab iswas open. ed
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