Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me correct the following paragraph.
According to our analysis and discussion, the phenomenon of student Internet addiction is getting more and more serious. In the thriving of Internet era, students should learn self-control and self-regulating, developing the good habit of surfing the Internet, finding the reasons which caused them addicted on the Internet and getting rid of them. Parents also should show consideration for kids, and compulsorily control their time on surfing the Internet, so as to promote the result of their schoolwork.
According to our analysis and discussion, the phenomenon of student Internet addiction is getting more and more serious. In the thriving of Internet era, students should learn self-control and self-regulating, developing the good habit of surfing the Internet, finding the reasons which caused them addicted on the Internet and getting rid of them. Parents also should show consideration for kids, and compulsorily control their time on surfing the Internet, so as to promote the result of their schoolwork.