thew
New member
- Joined
- Feb 5, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Turkish
- Home Country
- Turkey
- Current Location
- Turkey
Greetings everyone. I came up with a profile on a certain website recently and I claim that there are many mistakes in this text. Now, I am not a native speaker and thus my knowledge is being questioned. So, I was wondering if someone might be willing to correct the mistakes for him and maybe suggest better words if some of them just don't look right.
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English:
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You can have ever-lasting conversations unless you pose the following clauses : "Where are you?", "Do you want to meet?", "I've no face photo here, but I may show it on cam.", "Shall we screw around?", "I'm not into anal sex.". Supposing you used at least one of these, depending on you, I'll canalize you through three possible ways, which enjoy negative responses.
1- If your profile says you're Top, I'm not interested.
2- If you don't attract me, I'm not interested.
3- If you want to go out or hang out, I'm not interested.
A hierarchical order does exist in salutation, just as in real life.
You write, I see, we talk, and decision follows.
I'm here not because I want to fall in love but because I would like to start something, which provides satisfaction for both of us -In other words, a sex partner.
My priority is to achieve a consensus about ourselves with the guy I meet and to have fun.
I do not have any huge expectation, until I find the One.
When the most suitable and desired body possessed, I'm able to release my inner "Kraken".
Just as everybody does, I have fantasies and fetishes, too.
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English:
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You can have ever-lasting conversations unless you pose the following clauses : "Where are you?", "Do you want to meet?", "I've no face photo here, but I may show it on cam.", "Shall we screw around?", "I'm not into anal sex.". Supposing you used at least one of these, depending on you, I'll canalize you through three possible ways, which enjoy negative responses.
1- If your profile says you're Top, I'm not interested.
2- If you don't attract me, I'm not interested.
3- If you want to go out or hang out, I'm not interested.
A hierarchical order does exist in salutation, just as in real life.
You write, I see, we talk, and decision follows.
I'm here not because I want to fall in love but because I would like to start something, which provides satisfaction for both of us -In other words, a sex partner.
My priority is to achieve a consensus about ourselves with the guy I meet and to have fun.
I do not have any huge expectation, until I find the One.
When the most suitable and desired body possessed, I'm able to release my inner "Kraken".
Just as everybody does, I have fantasies and fetishes, too.