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    Default He likes privacy so as a roomate, I need to accommadate his wish

    1) It is good to try to talk to someone who you have just met in order to get to know the person better. For example, knowing what the person's like and dislike or sensitivity so that you know which limit or the boundary that you cannot cross. With the knowledge that you have, you will know what to do and what not to do to upset the person.

    2) I wil try to understand his like and dislike or sensitivity and adapt/accommadate accordingly to his needs.

    3) He likes privacy so as a roomate, I need to accommadate his wish.



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    Default Re: He likes privacy so as a roomate, I need to accommadate his wish

    Quote Originally Posted by Jit833 View Post
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    It is good to try to talk to someone who you have just met in order to get to know the person better; for example, knowing w[STRIKE]hat [/STRIKE] the person's likes and dislikes or sensitivities, so that you know which limit or the boundary that you cannot cross. With the knowledge information that you have obtain , you will know what to do and what not to do to upset the person.

    2) I wil try to understand his likes and dislikes or sensitivities and adapt /accommodate accordingly to his needs.

    3) He likes privacy so, as a roommate, I need to accommodate according to his wish.



    I hope I the above paragraph and sentences are understandable. I hope the teachers on in this forum can give me some useful suggestions on how to write it them in a better way. Thanks.
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    Default Re: He likes privacy so as a roomate, I need to accommadate his wish

    "Obtained"

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    Default Re: He likes privacy so as a roomate, I need to accommadate his wish

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    "Obtained"
    "Obtain" (Simple Present") is OK. The rule from Longman's Focus On Grammar: "When a dependent clause talks about a future time, use the simple present in the dependent clause and the future in the independent clause. Both verbs are future in meaning".

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