[Grammar] modern society

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Ashiuhto

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Which of the following sentences is acceptable?

1. In modern society, everybody might be under some pressure because of schoolwork, work, or family.
2. In today's modern society, each person might be under pressure in some way by schoolwork, work, and family.
 

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Which of the following sentences is acceptable?

1. In modern society, everybody might be under some pressure because of schoolwork, work, or family.
2. In today's modern society, each person might be under pressure in some way by schoolwork, work, and family.

#2 is not acceptable.
 
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