[Grammar] pie chart

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following sentences.

1. According to the pie chart, we can find that only one-fourth of us can get enough sleep.
2. Most people have trouble sleeping.
3. It seems that how to sleep well has become a big problem in our life.
 

Grumpy

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Please help me correct the following sentences.

1. According to the pie chart, we [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] find that only [STRIKE]one-fourth[/STRIKE]one in four of us [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] gets enough sleep.
2. Most people have trouble sleeping.
3. It seems that [STRIKE]how to sleep[/STRIKE]not sleeping well has become a big problem in our lives.

- the problem is not sleeping well; the challenge​ is how to sleep well. You could re-phrase paragraph 3 to reflect that, if you wish.
 
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