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    rephrasing a sentence

    I would like to rephrase this sentence "Coordinating with the Oasis Dinning Facility for food for the VIP's"


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    Re: rephrasing a sentence

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    Re: rephrasing a sentence

    Firstly, it isn't a sentence- there's no main verb. If you want to make it a sentence, try:
    We collaborate/coordinate with the Oasis Dining Facility to provide food for the VIPs.

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