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    Olacnog is offline Newbie
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    Default Correct my english, please. Urgent.

    Thanks in advance. This is a formal letter.

    "Motivation to take part in the course

    I am highly interest in taking part on this course because I hope to start my scientific research in evolutionary biology, particularly in animal behavior. Therefore, an extra-curricular course that help its students on creating new ideas and making good science seems a right course for me, mostly because Iím beginning my career and Iím hoping to start it in the right track. There are also well-known researchers on the organization and I was hoping that I could learn more from them. Finally, I was hoping to improve my critical sense when I have to deal with new scientific breakthroughs.

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    It is generally assumed that females choose mates independently from each other and that their choices are mostly genetic and fixed through their lives. But mate choice can also be influenced by a femaleís social environment. My project involves the study of mate-choice copying and hybridization in two populations of Drosophila subobscura. Will these populations, originated from the extremes of Europe, adapted to contrasting environmental conditions, copy each other mating preferences in the common environment? Will hybridization be facilitated by means of mate-choice copying? Finally, will this behavior evolve, namely as a consequence of adaptation to a homogeneous condition?

    Your field of interest

    My field of interest is animal behavior, in an evolutionary perspective. I am particularly interested in the study of animalís consciousness and its evolution but also on the evolution of some more basic behaviors, like mate choice, leadership and any kind of social interaction in general. I am also interested in animalís emotions.

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    I like to discuss any kind of subject that is related to philosophy, biology or ethics. I am also an addicted in movies or books. I am trustworthy and I always meet the schedules. I like to keep things organize and well under control. I am not a very social guy, but Iím always ready to discuss something that I find interesting and Iím always ready to help someone who needs. "

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    tedtmc is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: Correct my english, please. Urgent.

    "Motivation to take part in the course

    I am highly very interested in taking part onin this course because I hope to start my scientific research in evolutionary biology, particularly in animal behavior. Therefore, an extra-curricular course that helps its students on in creating new ideas and making good science (what is good science?) seems to be a right course for me, mostly mainly because Iím beginning my career and Iím hoping to start it in on the right track. There are also well-known researchers on in the organization and I was hoping that I could learn more from them. Finally, I was hoping to improve my critical sense (what is critical sense?) when I have to deal with new scientific breakthroughs.

    Short description of current research project

    It is generally assumed that females choose mates independently from of each other and that their choices are mostly genetic and fixed through their lives. But mate choice can also be influenced by a femaleís social environment. My project involves the study of mate-choice copying and hybridization in two populations of Drosophila subobscura. Will these populations, originated from the extremes of Europe (,) and adapted to contrasting environmental conditions, copy each other's mating preferences in the common environment? Will hybridization be facilitated by means of mate-choice copying? Finally, will this behavior evolve, namely, as a consequence of adaptation to a homogeneous condition?

    Your field of interest

    My field of interest is animal behavior (,) in an evolutionary perspective. I am particularly interested in the study of animalís consciousness and its evolution but and also on in the evolution of some more basic behaviors, like mate choice, leadership and any kind of social interaction in general. I am also interested in animalís emotions.

    Short sketch about yourself

    I like to discuss any kind of subject that is related to philosophy, biology or ethics. I am also an iaddicted in to movies or books. I am trustworthy and I always meet the schedules. I like to keep things organized and well under control. I am not a very social sociable guy, but Iím always ready to discuss something that I find interesting and Iím always ready to help someone who needs in need.

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