Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. #1
    nastasiah is offline Newbie
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • French
      • Home Country:
      • France
      • Current Location:
      • France
    Join Date
    Feb 2013
    Posts
    2
    Post Thanks / Like

    Exclamation IMPORTANT : I'm looking for someone who could help me correct my cover letter :)

    URGENT

    Hello, I'm a second-year student in English and German, and next year, I want to do a year abroad (Erasmus) and I am currently applying for this. I wrote my cover letter both in English and French but I would like to find someone who could take a look at it in order to correct it before I send my file.
    It is really important, and if someone could help me AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, it would be great...

    Thank you very much.

  2. #2
    5jj's Avatar
    5jj is offline VIP Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Retired English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • England
      • Current Location:
      • Czech Republic
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Posts
    28,167
    Post Thanks / Like

    Re: IMPORTANT : I'm looking for someone who could help me correct my cover letter :)

    You can try posting it here. Unfortunately, not many of our members have time to proofread/correct/critique letters, so you may be disappointed.

  3. #3
    nastasiah is offline Newbie
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • French
      • Home Country:
      • France
      • Current Location:
      • France
    Join Date
    Feb 2013
    Posts
    2
    Post Thanks / Like

    Re: IMPORTANT : I'm looking for someone who could help me correct my cover letter :)

    I can post my letter, if someone has a minute to take a look at it, it ould be great, but if not, I'll find another way to correct it !

    Dear Madam, dear Sir,

    I am currently a second-year student in LLCE and I would like to spend my third year’s second semester abroad as an Erasmus student.
    Living abroad during some months must be not only a linguistic experience, but also a rich and educative personal experience in every way, which can only be beneficial. Discovering a different culture would be an exceptional opportunity.
    I have now been studying German for seven years, and I have always liked this language very much, therefore I would really like to spend these six months in a German city. Last summer, I worked as a trilingual receptionist in a campsite and thus, I have had many opportunities to meet and to speak to Germans who appeared to be open-minded and welcoming people.
    Some years ago, I spent a week in Germany, and another one in Austria last year, and these two stays, which were too short, made me feel like discovering the German culture and way of life in depth.
    If I chose Bremen, it is because this city is part of the English sphere, and being in a bilingual course, this university would be perfect for me to improve my German as well as making progress in English. Moreover, I wish to enter the ESIT in the future –Ecole Supérieure d’Interprètes et de Traducteurs in Paris-, and in order to maximize my chances to join this school, it is highly recommended to have spent at least a semester in a German country.
    Bremen is a very touristic and historic city, which is in the neighbourhood of other big cities that I would like to discover, such as Hamburg or Hannover. What is more, this city welcomes many students, the meetings and exchanges must consequently bring a lot on the human plan.

    Regards.

Similar Threads

  1. [General] Please correct my cover letter
    By Eds in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 13-Jul-2009, 22:38
  2. to correct my cover letter,
    By bluesmoke in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 08-Feb-2009, 00:29
  3. [Grammar] Can you correct my Cover Letter please
    By ReeRee in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 06-Feb-2009, 15:10
  4. Replies: 3
    Last Post: 27-Jan-2009, 18:31
  5. I would like it if anyone could check my cover letter.... it is really important
    By plemplemy in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 23-Feb-2007, 12:08

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •