Is the English language itself a problem or the writer of it. I use Grammarly and it is a Godsend to me. I cannot seem to find (my style) of writing. I write to inform and be informed and too learn. I have a reading and writing comprehension problem. I am blind to verbs and nouns but fanatical on sentence structure which I think compensates for the nouns and verbs problems. I try my best to make all the points understandable, but again my free style does not seem to be my best writing.

If there is one point to make, it should be a short one. But can it be better understood if one uses indents to make points or links? I am impressed by the Wikipedia. It seems to be what I call informed writing. But overdoing links seem to destroy the points. Critique this for me please. Paul