[General] Should I use the read sentence or blue sentence?

Status
Not open for further replies.

uktous

Senior Member
Joined
Nov 7, 2009
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Japanese
Home Country
Japan
Current Location
UK
Hi,

Question:
Should I use the read sentence or blue sentence?


I am recognized for making valuable contributions to the company.
My contributions to the company are highly recognized.
For example, I developed a product which is very attractive for young people, and I made a website for the company.



Thanks
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
Hi,

Question:
Should I use the [STRIKE]read[/STRIKE] red sentence or blue sentence?


I am recognized for making valuable contributions to the company.
My contributions to the company are highly recognized.
For example, I developed a product which is very attractive for young people, and I made a website for the company.

Thanks

Note the correct spelling of the colour red.

I would use something like "I have made important contributions to the company, such as developing a very popular product for young people, and building a website for the company. The value of these contributions has been fully recognised by my managers."

Remember that you might have to go into more detail about the product and the website, and that you may be asked to provide evidence that the company recognised your efforts in these areas.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top