[grammar]rephrasing correct?please

[mralluk]

1.we didn't realise we had dropped our apartment keys at the supermarket until we got home (It..)
1.it was only after we got home when we realise that we had dropped our apartment keys at the supermarket
2.both of the films we saw were bad.(Neither..)
2.neither of films we saw was good.
3.i don't trust any of his offers(I trust..)
3.I trust none of his offers.
4.I have often thought of living on my own.(Many a time...)
4.Many a time i have thought of living on my own.
5.It hasn't raiend here for last couple of months.(There...)
5.There has been 2 months since last rain.
6.I believe you are the one who has been trying to get in touch with me these days.(I believe it...)
6.i believe it was you the one who tried to get in touch with me these days.
7.people who says that about me are liars.(Anyone...)
7.Anyone who says that is a liar.
8.I don't care what you do,just leave me alone.(Whatever...)
9.I heard the noise at 2 PM sharp.

 

[Rover_KE]

1.We didn't realise we had dropped our apartment keys at the supermarket until we got home (It..)

1.It was only after we got home that we realised that we had dropped our apartment keys at the supermarket.

2.Both of the films we saw were bad.(Neither..)

2.Neither of films we saw was good.

3.I don't trust any of his offers(I trust..)

3.I trust none of his offers.

4.I have often thought of living on my own.(Many a time...)

4.Many a time I have thought of living on my own.

5.It hasn't rained here for the last couple of months.(There...)

5.There hasn't been any rain here for the last couple of months.

6.I believe you are the one who has been trying to get in touch with me these days.(I believe it...)

6.I believe it was you who has been trying to get in touch with me these days.

7.People who say that about me are liars.(Anyone...)

7.Anyone who says that about me is a liar.

8.I don't care what you do,just leave me alone.(Whatever...)

9.I heard the noise at 2 PM sharp.

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Start every sentence with a capital letter.

Rover

 

[mralluk]

Thank you very much.