Please, is the following sentence correct?
The pretty young girl in front of you at whom everybody is looking is the writer's daughter.
Last edited by HifaMo; 21-Feb-2013 at 18:11. Reason: Typo (at)
With at corrected, your sentence is grammatically correct. But it does not sound very natural. Whom is little used nowadays. More natural would be:
The pretty young girl in front of you who everybody is looking at is the writer's daughter.