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    Teacher, is this sentence OK?

    I am not good at writing letters and this is one area I need to improve in. To do that, I plan to read more.

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    Re: to improve

    Quote Originally Posted by thomas615 View Post
    Teacher, is this sentence OK?

    I am not good at writing letters and this is one area I need to improve in . To do that, I plan to read more.
    Or the less typical/more formal, "....one area in which I need to improve"
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    Re: to improve

    I'm not sure how reading more generally will help you to write letters. It would probably help if you read lots of example letters.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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