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    Question Are these sentences correct?

    Please help me with the following sentences. Thank you.

    #1 Giraffes have a lot of endurance. That's impressive for being such a large and tall animal to have a lot of endurance.
    (Do we need the word 'being' here?)

    #2 These giraffes, they are able to keep doing something for great amount of time.
    (Is it better to say 'for a great amount of time'?)
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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    I cannot view the files, but I can tell you that the captions are not written by native speakers and need to be rewritten more radically than by adding or removing a single word here and there.

    A better title would have been 'Giraffes'.

    Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.
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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    Giraffes have a lot of endurance. That's impressive for being such a large and tall animal to have a lot of endurance

    I would write: Giraffes have a lot of endurance, which is impressive for such large and tall animals.

    These giraffes, they are able to keep doing something for great amount of time.

    I would write: Giraffes are able to do the same task for long periods of time.

    Hope this helps,
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    Re: Are these sentences correct?

    #1 If there were a dialog between A and B, as follows, would it be better to remove the word 'being'?

    A: Giraffes have a lot of endurance! They sleep 20 minutes to two hours a day.
    B: That's impressive for being such a large and tall animal to have a lot of endurance.

    #2 If it is rewritten as 'giraffes, like camels, can walk for a great amount of time without drinking water,' is it fine?
    Last edited by Heidi; 22-Feb-2013 at 16:26.

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