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    Erasmus Cover letter, needs revision

    Hi guys! I am applying for erasmus programme at cbs and I need a cover letter /motivation letter. Here's what I wrote. Could you please correct any mistakes / give me suggestions? Thank you very much

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    Subject: Motivation Letter

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    My name is ++++ ++++, I am a graduate student of the Master in Economics and International Policies (MSc) at Università della Svizzera Italiana (USI) in Lugano, Switzerland.
    I am writing this because I would like to have the opportunity to spend the fall semester of this year, at the prestigious Copenhagen Business School, by taking part in the Erasmus Programme as an international exchange student.
    I have decided to apply for Copenhagen Business School because of the prestige of the university, my personal interest in the excellent courses offered and their relevance to my educational path, as I am currently studying Economics and I have graduated in 2011 with full marks with honors (“summa cum laude”) in Language Sciences at Catholic University of the Sacred Heart in Milan, having studied International Relations, English and Chinese language and culture as majors.
    In particular, studying at CBS would grant me the opportunity to further develop my knowledge in the field of Economics in order to combine it, in a future working environment, with my language skills, as many courses offered at CBS have marked international contents, regarding emerging markets and international business.
    For these reasons, I am strongly motivated to diligently attend classes and study at Copenhagen Business School, which I consider the best choice for me as I think I would greatly benefit from the courses it offers.
    Furthermore, I am convinced that this experience would provide important new skills and competences, as well as improve the ones I have already acquired.
    Thus, I consider myself to qualify for attending the 2013 fall semester at Copenhagen Business School as I have the necessary skills as well as strong interest and
    personal motivation to fully benefit from this important opportunity.
    Hoping for a positive outcome of my application, I thank you in advance for
    considering my request.

    Yours faithfully,
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    Re: Erasmus Cover letter, needs revision

    WOW!! Excellent.

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    Re: Erasmus Cover letter, needs revision

    Quote Originally Posted by billmcd View Post
    WOW!! Excellent.
    Thanks So you haven't found any mistakes or any part you would change (either in its form or content)?

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    Re: Erasmus Cover letter, needs revision

    No, except line spacing between paragraphs,

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    Re: Erasmus Cover letter, needs revision

    Quote Originally Posted by billmcd View Post
    No, except line spacing between paragraphs,
    I'll look into that, thank you very much!

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