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    Question Please Help Check My Paragraph ???

    Please help fine the mistakes in my paragraph my teacher says there is 5 errors please me find them??


    People today, become famous for a variety of reasons. Striving to be the best you can in your chosen profession is one way that could make you famous. Many famous people receive many good things like; money, awards, prestige, and the ability to switch careers. Some go from sports or singing to acting. Regardless of how people become famous in today's society, they end up on television and in the news. The notoriety of some famous people have cameramen chasing them all over the place trying to get their pictures to sell to magazines, or the news. This has been a problem for some who want privacy at certain times. Being famous means giving up your privacy, you have to decide if it's worth it to you.

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    Punctuation sentence 1, sentence 3, subject/verb agreement sentence 6, punctuation last sentence.

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