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    Post Could you please check my report?

    From: Mikheeva Yulia
    To: John Smith, the warden of the flats
    Subject: Suggesting for improving the flats
    Date: February 24, 2013

    Introduction
    The aim of this report is to suggest ways of improving the university flats in order to make them safer and more pleasant to live in.

    General problems
    In general, the university flats need repairs. The painted walls got lots of cracks in the paint. Furthermore, there are some problems with heating and electricity systems.

    Suggested Improvements
    There are a number of improvements that could be made. In the first place the repair must be done immediately. To make this process less expensive I suggest that students living here should unite and make the repair themselves. Secondly, the call must be done to some special companies in order to solve the problem with heating and electricity systems.

    Conclusion
    All in all, I feel that these improvements would make the university flats safer and more pleasant to live in.

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    Default Re: Could you please check my report?

    Quote Originally Posted by JTSC View Post
    From: Mikheeva Yulia
    To: John Smith, the warden of the flats
    Subject: Suggestions for Improving the Flats
    Date: February 24, 2013

    Introduction
    The aim of this report is to suggest ways of improving the university flats in order to make them safer and more pleasant to live in.

    General problems
    In general, the university flats need repairs. The painted walls got (or "have" in AmE) lots of cracks. in the paint. Furthermore, there are some problems with heating and electrical systems.

    Suggested Improvements
    There are a number of improvements that could be made. In the first place the repair must be done immediately. To make this process less expensive I suggest that students living here should unite and make the repair themselves. Secondly, the call must be done to some special companies that specialize in order to resolving the problems with heating and electrical systems.

    Conclusion
    All in all, I feel that these improvements would make the university flats safer and more pleasant to live in.
    Suggestions.

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