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    Question Please Help Me???

    Please help fine the mistakes in my paragraph my teacher says there is 5 errors please me find them??


    People today, become famous for a variety of reasons. Striving to be the best you can in your chosen profession is one way that could make you famous. Many famous people receive many good things like; money, awards, prestige, and the ability to switch careers. Some go from sports or singing to acting. Regardless of how people become famous in today's society, they end up on television and in the news. The notoriety of some famous people have cameramen chasing them all over the place trying to get their pictures to sell to magazines, or the news. This has been a problem for some who want privacy at certain times. Being famous means giving up your privacy, you have to decide if it's worth it to you.

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    Default Re: Please Help Me???

    Quote Originally Posted by tanyasmart
    Please help fine the mistakes in my paragraph my teacher says there is 5 errors please me find them??
    People today, become famous for a variety of reasons. Striving to be the best you can in your chosen profession is one way that could make you famous. Many famous people receive many good things like; money, awards, prestige, and the ability to switch careers. Some go from sports or singing to acting. Regardless of how people become famous in today's society, they end up on television and in the news. The notoriety of some famous people have cameramen chasing them all over the place trying to get their pictures to sell to magazines, or the news. This has been a problem for some who want privacy at certain times. Being famous means giving up your privacy, you have to decide if it's worth it to you.
    Hi there!

    I think one is : * Many famous people receive = received
    * Some go from sports or singing to acting .......what about "Some were able to switch careers from sports or singing into acting".
    * you have to decide if it's worth it to you........you have to decide
    wether it's worth it.

    * to magazines or the news........to magazines or news agencies
    *Striving to be the best you can in your chosen profession is one way that could make you famous....Note: use just one modal in a sentence like can and can not can and then could. It should be : Striving to be the best you can in your chosen profession is one way that can make you famous.

    c u

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