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    Default Urgent! Please help me correct the following letter.

    Please help me correct the following letter
    Ask for re-arrangement of date of interview

    My name is ABC, canadidate number: 123456. I am delighted to have received your invitation to attend an interview held on 08:30 a.m., 4 April 2013. However, I am sorry to inform you that as I have originally been scheduled to attend an examination at the same time, I am afraid that I am unable to attend your arranged interview. As such, I would like to ask for your assistance in re-arranging the date of interview, desirably later than 4 April 2013, so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all. If you have any queries, please feel free to contact me at 1234-5678. Thank you for your assistance.

    Thank you very much!

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    Default Re: Urgent! Please help me correct the following letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by chowbarry View Post
    Please help me correct the following letter


    Request for re-arrangement of interview date of interview


    My name is ABC, and my canadidate number is 123456.

    I am was delighted to have received receive your invitation to attend an interview held on 08:30 a.m., 4 April 2013 at 8.30 a.m. However, I am sorry to inform you that as Unfortunately, I have originally already been scheduled to attend sit an examination at the same time on the same morning, I am afraid that so I am unable to attend your arranged the interview. As such, I would like to ask for your assistance in re-arranging be very grateful if you would re-arrange the date of the interview, desirably preferably later than after 4 April 2013. so that I can have an opportunity to talk with you all. If you have any queries, Please feel free to contact me at on 1234-5678 if you need to discuss the matter.

    I look forward to hearing from you with a revised interview date. Thank you for your assistance.
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