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    Unhappy would you chek my grammer and puncuation plz

    The different between Mrs Croft and her daughter Helen are the dress style and the proper and the age. Firstly, there is a big difference between Mrs Croft dress and Helen. To illustrate, Mrs Croft wore black skirt and white blouse in contrast Helen wore a sleeveless summer dress. According to Mrs Croft she did not satisfied with her daughter dress. As a result, she said that is improper for a lady of Helenís station to reveal her age, and to wear a dress so high above the ankle. The funny thing is that when Helen told her mother what would you do if you left the house one day and saw a girl in miniskirt? She answered Iíd have her arrested. Secondly, the contrast between Mrs Croft and Helen is the behavior of talking with men. For example, when Mrs croft hear her daughter talk to the narratorís she said for them come downstairs immediately because it is improper for a lady and gentleman who are not married to one another to hold a private conversation without a chaperone. Finally, the age is the biggest different between Mrs Croft and Helen. As a result of their age they have a lot of difference what we talk about. To sum up, the biggest reason of the difference between Mrs Croft and Helen their age. Every generation is different than the old generation.

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    Default Re: would you chek my grammer and puncuation plz

    the dress style- the way they dress
    the proper- I don't really know what you want to say, but this needs changing
    Mrs Croft dress and Helen- Mrs Croft's clothes and Helen's/the way Mrs Croft dresses and helen
    wore black skirt - a black...
    in contrast- while
    According to Mrs Croft she did not satisfied- mrs Croft wasn't pleased with what her daughter was wearing
    Helen told her mother what would you do- asked her mother what she would do
    of talking - when talking
    hear- past tense
    narrator’s- narrator,
    them come- them to come
    lot of difference what we talk about- differences in what they talk about
    the old generation- the previous generation

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    Default Re: would you chek my grammer and puncuation plz

    thank you a lot really it is helpfull

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    You're welcome.

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