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    jasonlulu_2000 is offline Senior Member
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    Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave others bad impressions, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.

    Should I change it as "Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave a bad impression on others, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.?

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    HanibalII is offline Member
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    Default Re: leave others bad impressions

    Quote Originally Posted by jasonlulu_2000 View Post
    Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave others bad impressions, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.

    Should I change it as "Those who don’t behave themselves, not only leave a bad impression on others, but also affect the learning environment and joyful atmosphere.?

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    Jason
    Your edit sounds better and is more natural.
    I'm not a teacher yet, but I am studying a Bachelor of Education with an English Literature major at Charles Sturt University, in NSW, Australia.

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