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    Angelika1995 is offline Newbie
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    Question Mistakes in application letter

    Hello. Please, can you help me with my application letter. My teacher highlighted my mistakes. How do you think is right?

    "I have just read the advertisement in the newspaper to young people for working in activity centre for children. I would like to apply for a job here.

    Mistakes I need to fix in bold.

    Thank you very much for your reply.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: Mistakes in application letter

    We don't do homework for people.

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