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    Please correct this sentence

    HOCCS was establishment with the purpose of introducing and exploring alternative development approaches for under-developed communities. It transfers information, equips with skills and create opportunities for the target group enabling the building of their own solutions to development challenges. It involves communities at the grassroots level by encouraging the integrated approach with environmental, social and economic considerations in the strategic interventions of development of the community.

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    Re: Please correct this sentence

    Guys please reply to this post.

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    Re: Please correct this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by nakash View Post
    HOCCS was establishment with the purpose of introducing and exploring alternative development approaches for under-developed communities. It transfers information, equips with skills and create opportunities for the target group enabling the building of their own solutions to development challenges. It involves communities at the grassroots level by encouraging the integrated approach with environmental, social and economic considerations in the strategic interventions of development of the community.
    HOCCS was established with the purpose of introducing and exploring alternative development approaches for under developed communities. It transfers information, equips with skills, and creates opportunities for the target group. This enables the communities to build of their own solutions to development challenges. HOCCS involves communities at grass root level, by encouraging an integrated approach, with environmental, social, and economic considerations. These considerations allow strategic interventions in the development of the community.

    I have no idea what you're on about, but now its written in English.

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