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[jubiliii]

can someone please help me

i left my family and arizona and the rest of my non existent life to go to a pubic school in michigan. my mother insisted on singing to Beyonce the whole car ride to my new apartment when we finally arrived i gave her a big hug and kiss on the cheek and we said are goodbyes as i walked into my room i notice a very beautiful girl i got so mesmerized i just stood at the door like a dummy as she called my name finally i snapped out of it and said sup i i think to myself you are such a loser i can tell she is one of the popular kids at school but anyway maybe i should snap out of it again


hi... i said awkwardly


hey jesse
i have been waiting for you nice to finally meet you my name is Selena i had no idea i was going to have a boy for a roommate the girls are gonna get a kick out of this well as your room is the one on the left go ahead and set your things in there


ok thank you i will be back i am just gonna set my thing up


wow this room is huge room i never expected the apartment to be so nice i guess i will have to call my mom later and thank her for such a great place.

 

[emsr2d2]

There is nothing we can do with your piece until you sort out the lack of capitalisation and punctuation. Please edit your post, following these rules of written English:

- Start every new sentence with a capital letter.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- End every sentence with a single appropriate punctuation mark.
- Speech should be enclosed in quotation marks, for example ... "Hi", I said awkwardly.

Don't use "textspeak/chatlish" such as "gonna" - it's "going to".