I think you are relying too heavily on style, and are light on substance. "The infrastructure of urban cities will not be influenced' by an influx of rural people, according to your conclusion. Urban cities is a pleonasm, redundant. 'Influence' means ''affect,' and no reasonable person would think rapid urbanisation could possibly happen without affecting the infrastructure.
While I can generally get your meaning, your over-writing makes it hard to give you a high mark.
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