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    Default Change the sequence of the deliveries with me.

    1) There are two deliveries drivers and one of them got a bad sequence of deliveries because the address were far as for the other driver he had a good deliveries sequence/flow because all the orders were closeby.

    2) Change the sequence/flow of the deliveries with me so that you can deliver some close distance order.


    Can I write the above sentences like that? :)

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    Default Re: Change the sequence of the deliveries with me.

    These contain so many errors that they barely understandable.

    1) There are two delivery drivers. One got a bad sequence of deliveries because the addresses were far apart. As for the other driver, he had a good sequence because all the orders were close by.

    2) Exchange (or trade) some deliveries with me so that we will both have some nearby and some farther away.

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